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It was a day unlike any other in the town of Deacon’s Landing, Connecticut. It was the day Kenny Atkins cornered Matty Anderson in the locker room on what turned out to be the final day of classes at Deacon’s Landing Middle School. When the school is destroyed by fire, the teachers speak in hushed tones of “Dark Annie” Carlson, one of their own who vanished mysteriously shortly before the start of the school year.  



For nearly three decades the school remains dark and empty. Now the school is rebuilt and ready to accept students once again. A series of seemingly random events arouses the suspicions of police officer Matthew Anderson. Cryptic warnings from unrelated accident and assault victims and the return of Anderson’s childhood nemesis bring the legend of Dark Annie back to the forefront. Anderson confides in two old friends, Brian Murphy and Holly Wayne, and together they must face the secret horror buried beneath the idyllic façade of Deacon’s Landing.  


In order to save the town’s children they will be forced to confront the truth, the legend and the terror of Dark Annie.

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Meet the Author! Joseph J. Christiano
Joe grew up in Connecticut's Naugatuck Valley. A voracious reader since he was old enough to hold a book in his hands, he  sur-prised his second grade teacher by using the word "invulnerable" (learned from a Superman comic book) in a sentence. He wrote his first story at the ripe old age of 11. His published works include the novels The Last Battleship and Moon Dust.  His favorite authors and influences include Richard Matheson, Rod Sterling, Agatha Christie, Stephen King, Alan Moore and Neil Gaiman.

Characterization and Grief


Much has been said about developing three-dimensional characters and how incorporating the senses can breath life into them. Most authors are comfortable with having their characters feel love, hate, fear, and even desire. However, one of the most powerful and often most motivating emotions is grief. After all, desperation is a common reaction to denial, anger, or bargaining, three of the five stages of grief. It is perhaps one of the most underutilized emotions in writers' tool boxes. This may be because writers feel no one wants to read depressing narrative or connect with a sad, deflated character.  

If that's the case, it's not necessary to make the main character experience grief.  A bad guy who acts in despicable or desperate ways could have grief as a believable motivation.  Recall any recent bad guys who were desperate to reanimate a dead spouse, no matter the cost? Batman comes to mind. Then there's The Mummy and Dracula, just to name a few.

And who says the main character can't experience grief without being a sad sack?  Can't they pull themselves up and accept the death (final stage of grief that many never reach at all), getting on with their lives for the sake of their kids, parents, friends, employees, etc.. That makes them empathetic and makes the reader want them to be rewarded for their selfless sacrifice and their undeserved suffering. 

I want to also address characterization and how a main character's reaction to grief can be manipulated to push the plot. To say that a character must remain "in character" while reacting to grief is misleading. Coping with loss is a personal and singular experience. No one can understand all the emotions a mourning individual is experiencing and no one goes through the cycle smoothly or in a linear sequence. This is very useful for a writer because a character can act or do things that are "out" of character, due to grief.  Their behavior is also going to be modified by who it is they are mourning.  One mourns differently for a child, a parent, a friend, or a spouse. 

Finally, its important to remember that characters don't just grieve for people.  They can also grieve for a pet, a career, or anything else they value or cherish and lose. Losing a fortune would do it for most of us. So don't be afraid to pump up the drama and raise the stakes straight over the heart.





Tattle-Tales From The Editor's Desk


Assuming a writer has a functional grasp of grammar and story, there are still a few too-common mistakes new writers make. As an experienced editor, I often see manuscripts with excess backstory, characters readers care for about as much as the first-scene victim in a bad horror flick (and they of course went to the basement, so we think it fitting Darwinism at work), too much telling rather than showing, and books that end without closure because the writer feels they need to save some mystery for a sequel or they need an exact number of pages or word count.  There are some fairly easy fixes a hopeful writer can do before submitting their work to a publishing house.
 Too much back story is probably the easiest to fix. If you have to set a mood, or let the reader in on something they simply must know ahead of time, think about adding a short prologue. Other than that, you should always begin a story en media res, in the middle of the action. That’s why they call it an opening hook. More and more retail outlets are letting the readers “sample” the books.  If you don’t hook the reader in the first few seconds, they will probably stop reading and definitely won’t buy the book. If your main character is thinking rather than doing, they’d better be a) thinking crazy thoughts as in Edgar Allan Poe’s The Tell-Tale Heart, or b) thinking of doing something outrageous, like killing someone. 
 
Most new authors would benefit from just deleting the first couple chapters of their manuscript. Many authors do that intentionally. Think of it as the free-writing you did to get into the feel and sense of the work. Backfill the backstory in dialogue, either internal or spoken, and use a spoon instead of a shovel. Write tight!
 
If a reader gets to chapter two of a novel and could care less what is happening to the main character, the characters are made of dried up wood, and won’t stand up to a quick Bic flick, let alone sustain an entire novel. If the reader feels nothing for the main character, it’s because they have no idea how they should feel. The writer has not revealed the character’s motivations or emotional reactions. They may have the character say and do things, but a puppet could function that well. To become a living human being, even Pinocchio needed a heart. Writers must never forget action and then reaction (IN THAT ORDER!--just sayin').
 

The next and perhaps the worst mistake even some seasoned writers make is telling when they should be showing. This does not mean there is no place for passive voice in a story, but when something is happening in the present, especially, it is important to make the reader feel they are there witnessing the scene rather than hearing someone gossip about it after the fact. To do this does requires taking the reader to the location of the scene (setting), establishing the correct mood (pathetic fallacy works well here), and making sure the main characters are having a physical and/or emotional response to all stimuli.
Simply put, if someone slaps you in the face are you going to just keep talking as if nothing happened? Of course not, but I see it in manuscripts all the time. HOW the players react to stimuli is one way writers convey the character and morals of the individuals.
 
Telling someone the events, later on, does not allow the reader to know the character motivations and reactions as they happen so that they have a chance to react as well.  Do they feel sorry for the character? Angry? Hate another character? Understand a character better? They should.
 
That’s what helps a reader “see” the hero/heroine grow as a character, as an individual, as a person.  Stories are about people, even if the characters are not human. That’s why readers read.  They want to live in someone else’s world, and take a mental vacation. They can’t “picture” themselves there if they don’t get their 1000 words…which the writer has skillfully tightened to 100.
 
It’s fitting that I should talk about the conclusion last.
 
What?
 
How would you feel if that’s where this blog ended, with no discussion of how a good book should conclude? Magnify that by a few hundred pages and you know how a reader feels when they have invested the time and emotional commitment to a book’s story and characters only to have the writer leave them hanging.  We used to call those slam-against-the-wall endings. Chances are, that reader will never, ever read another book by said author, and will be sure to complain about it to all their friends, who will also never read a book by said author.  Selling books is like any other retail business. You need repeat customers. Just because your book isn’t a suspense or mystery doesn’t mean you can leave loose threads.
 
Would you want to read a whodunit that never revealed the killer? Well, readers also don’t want to read a romance where they don’t know what happens to the lovers, even if it’s only what they intend to do, as in a goal which the writer will most likely foil in the sequel. You can hint at coming events in the next novel, but you must give the reader a satisfying conclusion, even if it’s not a happy ending. But that’s an entirely different topic, so I will just conclude by saying that all’s well that ends well and leave the Shakespeare fans chuckling at the double meaning in that innocent phrase.
 
 

 
I hope you all now know to SHOW what happened next...and I bet Norma Bates knows....
 

Getting Into Your Historical Characters POV, As Published in Suspense Magazine

 By Ric Wasley

Using historical characters as a back-story for your suspense /mystery is a popular and proven successful literary device to add depth, clues and perspective to your story.

It’s also a great way to set up a compelling premise for the mystery and has been used with great success by numerous authors from Dan Brown to Alfred Hitchcock. Hitch was of course the one who gave the name, MacGuffin, to whatever was the object of the stories quest. For instance in the Maltese Falcon, Gutman, played by Sidney Greenstreet, explains to Bogey, Sam Spade, the ominous history of the “Black Bird” and what the cost of the pursuit has been in human lives. Think of how much less the suspense would have been had Dashiell Hammett not used that historical backstory and decided to make the MacGuffin say, a bag of cash from a local liquor store heist. It is the romance and danger surrounding the history of the Falcon that gives the story its tingling edge.   

But often you’ll run across historical characters and events who whether as backstory foils or main protagonists, seem lifeless and two dimensional. Worse yet sometimes they appear anachronistic. Almost as though a Hester Prynne type of character had decided to update that dreary old scarlet letter by taking a trip to the local Salem mall. 

Admittedly it is difficult for authors to put themselves in a different time and place when events, mores and behavior were far different. After all, every time and culture views the past through the prism of their own Zeitgeist and we today are no exception. And even though we have come to a more enlightened view on things like race, gender, sexual orientation and even children, projecting this enlightened view into a story robs it of its impact. For instance suppose that an author was writing a Dickensian tale and chose to have a caring social worker intercede in helping Oliver Twist get that extra bowl of gruel - or OSHA coming down on Simon Legree for deplorable working conditions. That would certainly make us feel better but would it make for powerful reading? Probably not.

So what is the answer? Obviously it is incumbent on authors to leave modern sensibilities here in the present and submerge themselves as much as possible into the period they’re writing about. Think of it as an imagination-powered time machine.

But while imagination is the touchstone of a writer's craft, too much of it can cloud the water when writing of another period. Because it’s not enough to get the framework of the history correct. A novel lives on its characters. Thus while the hard facts of names, dates and events must be correct, they don’t mean a thing if the characters you create are not truly products of their time and not ours.

So how do you get into that historical character’s head? The most direct way possible: by accessing the same things that real historical characters used to express their own personal thoughts and feelings; letters, diaries and journals.  

When I first started doing research for the historical flashbacks in my paranormal mystery, “Echoes Down a Dark Well”, and more recently a full-blown historical mystery called, “Candle in the Wind”, I began by using those musty old records that libraries euphemistically refer to as “the stacks”. And as every writer who’s ever used them knows, these are the books that look and smell like they haven’t been opened in a hundred years – and most of them haven’t. But often they hold the key to making your historical characters and setting ring with that elusive tone of authenticity. I found this out when writing, “Echoes Down a Dark Well”, a back-story that spans two thousand years. Finding first person records and accounts is difficult. Most of what you get for personal observation prior to the 16th or 17th Century is actually written by a third party chronicling events after the fact. 

There are of course some famous first person diaries and journals like for instance the diary of Samuel Peyps or Caesar’s Commentaries. This means that the author needs to fill in more of color to develop believable and complex characters from pre-Sixteenth Century settings.

One of the things I enjoy most about writing historical mysteries is uncovering some little known event or item mentioned in a journal or newspaper; then using that information and a knowledge of the period to imagine what it must have been like to experience that. Then once I’ve worked that out in my notes and research, setting my characters, with their own individual personalities, into that scene and letting the reader experience that event through them.

And if we do it right we will hopefully avoid the historical writer’s greatest hazard: anachronisms. It seems that those little buggers are lurking around the corners every time we engage our characters in action or dialog. And they are usually not as blatant as a protagonist who walks up to Henry Ford rolling off his first Model T and comments, “Dude. Nice ride”.

Were it so, they’d be easy for authors and editors to catch.  Alas, the types of anachronism that creeps into the story and leaves us feeling uneasy without knowing why are harder to spot. Why? Because they migrate unseen and unnoticed from our own mind and creep into the story without us being consciously aware of it. And the reason they are so hard to detect is because they bleed onto the page from our personal Zeitgeist and subtly color the world and thoughts of our major characters. This is especially true when it comes to characters thoughts and actions in dealing with the social mores of the period they are in.

Most writers and readers are well aware that the way in which we view and interact with the world is radically different than in almost every previous age. For instance: our views on things like the role of women in society, children, religion, race, ethnicity and slavery; just to name a few, are more different now than they have been at any time in human history.      

That means that to portray a historical period accurately the writer is going to have to go against the grain of everything we believe in now. For example, take slavery. Up until 150 years ago the attitude of almost every person of every race and ethnicity on every continent accepted it as a natural part of life. Remember, that man had been enslaving his fellow man since the first tribe conquered its rival and decided that it would be kind of nice to make the other guy do your heavy lifting. Rome built the first world empire on it.

So if you were trying to portray say; a protagonist living in the 18th Century, you would have to divorce yourself from your modern viewpoint of how wrong it was, and put yourself in the perspective of someone who’d been raised to believe that it was the natural order of things. Thus, unless the character was a nascent abolitionist, their viewpoint would not include the thoughts of equality that we take for granted today.

Sounds basic right? But it’s harder than we think to leave our core beliefs in the 21st Century and jump into a virtual time machine to where people behaved in ways that are anathema to us today.

That’s why I think the best way to avoid this pitfall is to create your characters from sources taken from the actual period.

Whenever I’m doing a historical book or story, I like to begin by immersing myself in journals, diaries, letters and first-hand accounts from the period. Even legends and sagas can be useful since even if they were created after the fact, they will produce a far more revealing viewpoint than our own. After all while we might not see much laudable in ancient swordsmen chopping their enemies into small pieces, the society which produced the saga, legend, song or even fairy tale, did.

For instance, Hansel & Gretel’s father didn’t abandon them in the woods because he lacked proper parenting skills; it was because he couldn’t feed them!  So that even a so called ‘fairy tale’ can give an insight on a period before there was any kind of social safety net making an action unconscionable today, a practical, if sad, part of life.    

And up until the 20th Century, how many men who were considered good, decent and pillars of the community looked upon their wives and daughters in a way that we would consider patronizing, chauvinistic and just plain wrong today?  And yet they did. It happened. And for every John Adams who took seriously and welcomed his wife Abigail’s admonishment to “remember the ladies”, there were millions who did not.

But that’s why it’s so important to portray our characters as realistically as possible within the context of their time and culture. Because by doing so, we as authors have the privilege of letting the world glimpse another era and in doing so gain a better understanding and appreciation of how the viewpoint of our modern world evolved. Or to paraphrase an old commercial from the late 20th Century, which even now seems almost like another era, “we’ve come a long way baby.” 
           
 And thanks to writers like us, we know just how far!

A member of Mystery Writers of America and the Cape Cod Writers Group, Ric Wasley is a writer and lecturer as well as the  author of the popular McCarthy mystery series set in Boston in 1968, and most recently Echoes Down A Dark Well from Tell-Tale Publishing.

Ric has a forty year professional career history in advertising, publishing, and marketing in Boston, New York, and San Francisco. He has degrees in history and psychology and has been trained in debating, public speaking, and stage acting. A large part of his forty year career was spent in numerous professional and business settings as a presenter and featured speaker at seminars and professional meetings. He also teaches a popular course on marketing for authors at prominent venues such as the venerable “Cape Cod Writers Conference.”



For more information, check out his website at www.ricwasley.com.

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